NaPoWriMo challenge: sea shanty.
Sea
shanty songs help the sailors to keep an even rhythm while working together, they
are usually boisterous songs. An even rhythm is also nice when kayaking. I hope
to convey to you the non-urgency and peacefulness that I experience while in my
kayak, the meditative calm of paddling.
So when you read this poem, sing it in a whisper.
Kayak
Draw
the paddle
go
slowly now
no
need to race
we’ve
got all day.
Draw
the paddle
go
quietly
I
see a loon
and
now she’s gone.
Draw
the paddle
the
sky’s so blue
the
water’s black
so
deep and cool.
Draw
the paddle
across
the bay
stroke
powerfully
aim
straight on course.
Draw
the paddle
lean
left and right
from
motor boats
a
rocking wake.
Draw
the paddle
avoiding
rocks
through
marsh and weed
and
snagging logs.
Draw
the paddle
go
silently
blue
heron hunts
patience
and stealth.
Draw
the paddle
along
side me
let’s
rest a while
my
love. To life!
1 comment:
Lovely - peaceful - easy to "see"
Thanks for taking us paddling...
luv u
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